Reviews for One Over The Other |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! I've got to say, you're a GREAT writer! Jack is such an ass! If a guy ever did that to me, I wouldnt take him back period. Thats just disrespectful! PLEASE UPDATE SON!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, great story so far! I love it. I guess the only thing is, Elliot doesnt really have to choose one over the other when she's pretty much chose Jack. Then again, its still great regardless so please update! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Is fantastic. Is perfectlly writed, and the characters seems real. About the Jack-Mitch dilema... Well, I think that Jack is an ass. How could he did that to tha poor girl? But on the other hand, Mitch seems too nice (at least right now hehe)... Im not a good judge, because I have a serious thing for truly bad boys. But, whoever Elliot choose its going to be great Updated soon! Love MAG |
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![]() ![]() ![]() As much as I like Mitch... I love Jack... even though he's a bit of a bastard and man is he cold! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I prefer Mitch...Jack's still a jerk... I'm starting to like Mitch more and more...cant wait for the next chapter...update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mitch. He doesn't jump to conclusions quickly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay first of all jack is being a jackass and needs to apoligize, but so does elliot. when i first saw elliot i remembered elliott smith...such a great singer. and second you never go out with your best friend's ex, its one of the worst things to do, so jack all the way or some other guy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() every single time things are about to get back on track, somebody has to screw it up! it's not fair! brooke needs to get her story straight before she screams at elliot, and elliot needs to talk to them both together. i still think elliot should be with jack but there's so many problems with them and jack's got such a bad record but still... i think they should end up together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still hate Jack ...Please dont take him back ...Mitch is so much better than him..I want him and Elliot get together... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i can't decide whether or not i'm happy that elliot will take him back... i like it, but i hate it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i almost cried~ update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw... this chapter made me so sad. Jack's such an idiot... you did a great job with this chapter. I hope you get a chance to update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like but jack seems like such a... now update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() jack is deffinately my least favorite person right now. actually, i'm close to hating him. honestly who in the world would do that? it's so cruel! gosh, and i thought he was a good person, and he was practically my favorite character. |