|Reviews for One Over The Other|
| ObliviousLady chapter 8 . 10/17/2007
Oh man, now that's just playing really dirty...
Poor Elliot... maybe Jack needs to be castrated... what's up his butt, anyways? update soon!
| SummerBaby94 chapter 8 . 10/17/2007
wow... jack is such an ass... i don't like him at all right now... he pretty much added salt to an open wound with cindy and telling her that she was much better than elliot... actually the ending to this made me wanna cry so bad... all i want is for elliot and jack to be happy together.
| Aqua Revolver chapter 8 . 10/17/2007
Hey just reviewing to say that the last bit of this chapter was heart wrenching!... absolutely fabulous though.
Can't wait until the next chapter gets written
| ObliviousLady chapter 7 . 10/14/2007
Hmm, drama and sexual tension... very interesting. I hope to see more soon.
| SummerBaby94 chapter 7 . 10/13/2007
as soon as i read, that brooke and mitch went into the bathroom i figured out that brooke's most likely pregnant... i'm pretty sure... hahaha. the car scene was great.
| SummerBaby94 chapter 6 . 10/9/2007
i really hope jack turns out to be a good guy! he comes off so sweet and perfect...
| sweet.becky chapter 5 . 10/2/2007
thnx for the update
| lighty-creamy chapter 5 . 10/1/2007
can't w ait to see what happend
| SummerBaby94 chapter 5 . 10/1/2007
hahaha. i loved it when elliot punched parker... maybe now he's realize that her and jack are going to go out... eventually... ahh i can't wait till next chapter so i can know what leo says!
| SummerBaby94 chapter 4 . 9/30/2007
hahaha. i love the pool part... i was cracking up... i love how you wrote this, because i felt their frustration!
| lighty-creamy chapter 4 . 9/29/2007
came back from hoildays & found 3 new chapters I
abostly love this story
| sweet.becky chapter 4 . 9/27/2007
i really like this story. i was just wondering how often you update? just so i know how often to check for one.
| SummerBaby94 chapter 3 . 9/21/2007
hahaha. i love the ending. gosh, i really hope parker doesn't screw everything up, it's over and he needs to move on! as for my last review, i just don't like his character, because people like him bother me, and he didn't make me want to stop reading at all. if anything he makes the story more interesting with all the drama.
| SummerBaby94 chapter 2 . 9/20/2007
ugh i don't like mitch at all... player much? i think jack and elliot are so perfect together and they should go out... and parker should just get over it and get out of the picture.
| lighty-creamy chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
i love this strory already please update soon