I loved the first two chapters I'm going to keep reading. You are good at this and should get this published!

Wow, I can't believe it's actually over! Yates is still such a sweetheart and I love him! I'd like to see something for Brooke, or maybe Jack. Either one of them.

i'm so disappointed that the story had to end! sniff sniff, this was my absolute FAVORITE story in fiction press too! i loved the ending though. i cant even begin to imagine the love yates has for elliot. its so sweet and when writing the sequel, i hope you'll have them end up together and married or something! yates is so sweet, 10 times better than jack. by the way IM SUPER EXCITED YOU'LL BE HAVING A SEQUEL! kinda sucks because it wont start until summer time but i'll be waiting! *sigh* i still cant believe how sweet yates is, he really loves elliot and wants to make things work. i wish i had someone that sweet and devoted to me! lol GREAT GREAT GREAT AND GREAT! i love this story, you're an awesome writer and i cant wait until your sequel! please keep us updated so we'll know when you write a new story or when the sequel will come out! thanks again )

awe. I absolutely loved the ending and I can not wait for the sequel, Summer is extremely too long to wait. But I will and I'll review every chance i get. Great story it was amazing

Wow, can't believe it's finished! Even if you change it, I actually like the ending. It's left me hopeful they'll carry on and all. ) I love it. Yates is just...gosh I wish he was .And that he was mine, haha.

Sequel...to be honest I thought you'd do a sequel for them...like maybe into the future? Like if they're still together or not. But then if they're together...there's not much point because it's obviously a happy ending. So I'd rather leave it as a happy ending, hehe.

As for the idea about Jack, I love it. Although he's completely opposite os Yates...it seems Jack's more...mean. But he seems genuinely nice when he wants to, so I think he needs to meet someone. )

There's always Brooke and Mitch..but that would be pretty much the same wouldn't it?

[The apartment we’re moving into is two floors up from Charlie’s which should be fun, he’s the only guy from that group staying, he says it’s because someone needs to stick around and protect their woman. Bullshit, but we don’t mind, he’s free entertainment. I feel slightly sorry for him, he’s got no guy friends left and doesn’t have a girlfriend, he’s rather alone.]

This got me interested in Charlie...so to be honest I think you could write about him. Although he wasn't mentioned much, there's so much you could write in a way...and him meeting someone would be great I think. )

Anyway, those are my ideas, you don't have to listen to me whatsoever. I really loved this story, it's hard to say bye... (

Thanks for the happy ending. )

OMG!

I L.O.V.E.D. It! I Cant wait til the Sequel to come out! It really was a good story and I really dont think you need to edit it casue it was great!

while Yates was talking on the CD to her, I almost started crying. It was so sweet and delicate.

So there IS a sequel? Sweet. I can't wait. ;)

Great story i enjoy

reading it. it kinda sad

at the end and i thought

it was sweet of him to

record a CD for her.

update!

haha, hilarious but absolutely adorable! ) I love it, it was perfect! The key to his heart is the key to the garden which is a really good idea, it sounds amazing. )

haha yates... )

aww this is cute

hah and he's adorable.

i want a boyfriend lik that

m, i think there might have been afew grammatical errors, like it was eat instead of ate.

im not sure though,

and great chapter.

that was so romantic! gosh if this was real, elliot is one lucky girl to have a guy like yates! hes a sweet heart ) this chapter was funny too ) lol falling, tripping & having zipping problems lol i love it. im sad the story is gonna end soon but i hope you do a sequel! i know with a sequel, theres gona be tons more drama and they might even break up but i still want a sequel! im not ready to say goodbye to yates and elliot ( haha i love them together though so hopefully if you do decide to do a sequel and they break up for some reason, hopefully they'll end up together again because they are so adorable together! they fit each other perfectly )

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