Reviews for One Over The Other
Out-Spoken-Runaway chapter 27 . 1/2/2008

PLEASE tell me Elliot doesn't mess this up! DON'T MAKE ANOTHER STORY. End this one in happiness! : D Lmao; I want Elliot to be like 'omg!' and start crying and say yeah to him and they live happily ever after! : D

Keep writing!

hopeless-flame chapter 27 . 1/1/2008
whoa! that's something pretty impressive yates.
lilswtmai chapter 27 . 1/1/2008
aw thats so freaking cute! i love this story, i love how yates is so open and honest with elliot. he doesnt feed her bullshit like how jack does *melts* i love this story! you rock! i was rooting for jack before but yates is one hottie with a good heart so im all in for yates.. please update son! )
xxily4everxx chapter 27 . 12/31/2007
aww! luv da ending
atreyu love chapter 27 . 12/31/2007


the suspense is killing me.

they have to end up together! PLEASE! lol

theyre made for each other! haha.

and the just gave her the "key to his heart"

she should do the same. :P

PandasAreCute chapter 27 . 12/31/2007
Gosh I am happy.

That chapter was so intense but so damn sweet.

The last bit, adorable but corny. :p haha. he's so sweet, she HAS to be with him. Tell me she won't run off or something! She can't!

Oh I hope you update soon. I know you've updated 2days in a row, but seriously, this is just amazing!

She has got to be with Yates. O

I shall be waiting in anticipation!

Excellent chapter!
RockstarBallerina chapter 27 . 12/31/2007
YAY finally now I hope she says that she loves him too update soon please
bobbychu chapter 27 . 12/31/2007
Ah! He finally said it. I like this chapter. ]
the big crunch chapter 27 . 12/31/2007

i actually cried.


i love Yates, he's amazing.
helplessly in love chapter 27 . 12/31/2007
aww omg i love this chapter

wow finally coming all out and

say what he really fel

i hope she would come all out

and say it too. i love the

last 4 lines you wrotw.
Apiavva chapter 27 . 12/31/2007
Aw that was so cute...can't wait for her reaction
SummerBaby94 chapter 27 . 12/31/2007
aw! yates is such a sweetheart! i honestly didn't think that they would try to work out their issues in this chapter though.
lilswtmai chapter 26 . 12/31/2007
i'm glad elliot lost her virginity to yates though, he seems to really care about her and defend her regardless of his reputation.. it was fucked up how jack said he also slept with her too.. elliots so dumb and naive though! yates clearly states his feelings towards her and she knows it yet she wont accept it and keeps thinking he doesnt care for her.. i guess she needs him to tell her straight up in order for her to believe him, whatever the case is i hope they get it figured out because they're perfect together ) please update!
lilswtmai chapter 25 . 12/31/2007
deng thats crazy! i almost feel sorry for jack.. too bad theres no elliot number 2 for him, he seems like a good guy & im sure if elliot chose him, he would treat her right.. gosh.. haha i like jack and yates both /
lilswtmai chapter 24 . 12/31/2007
love it! love all the details ) i hope yates clarifies rule 8 with elliot! they're so good together
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