|Reviews for One Over The Other|
| lilswtmai chapter 23 . 12/31/2007
did i ever say what a great writer you are? sheesh i love this story! i've been on vacation for the past week so time to catch up on your new chapters! i love it! yates is such a sweetheart and jack is an ass! lol
| i found nemo chapter 26 . 12/30/2007
Well, first things first - I think I just needed closure with Jack. That sounds silly, doesn't it? But what I mean is that as a former Jack-fan, I wanted to at least see him make peace with Elliot. And now that they have and Jack has given Elliot his "blessing" I am ready to see Elliot and Yates together. Make sense?
Anyway, a good chapter, despite how oblivious Elliot and Yates are to each other's feelings. It kind of frustrates me; I absolutely want to throttle them and say "can't you see what's right in front of you?"
Will this story be winding down soon?
| cherry617 chapter 26 . 12/30/2007
please dont let her get back with jack.
| every when chapter 26 . 12/30/2007
I really like your ideas, but I can't help but get EXTREMELY irritated at the way Elliot handles things. Errg. I just want her to confess. -_- It's killing me. I really wanted her to just sit down, and examine her feelings with Yates, not keep hearing from other people the way he felt about her. I don't mind if they both ended up not liking each other, I just wish it were down in black and white. And I wish that she would stop cutting him off. He was about to say something right? But yep, I still like your ideas, and I'm totally happy with the way her problems with Jack ended up.
Keep posting please!
| the big crunch chapter 26 . 12/30/2007
i think it makes me want to cry.
| SummerBaby94 chapter 26 . 12/30/2007
that's horrible! now my only hope is that maybe ana will go home and tell him that elliot really does like him, and he'll go tell elliot he really did mean those words. then everything will be all cliche and they'll end up happy. that's my fantasy and for now i'm clinging to it. haha.
| PandasAreCute chapter 26 . 12/30/2007
No! Oh no, I'm going to cry. Why oh why?
Stupid people always doing and saying the wrong things!
Why can't they just confess to each other how they feel and be honest. gr.
I'm too upset to say anything .
| Alexandra90 chapter 25 . 12/29/2007
OH MY GOD!
Can you i say that this story is brilliant...i dont know where to start at first i was all about jakc but now...im in love with yates...you're amazing keep it up and update soon!
| darkgurl92 chapter 25 . 12/27/2007
| fantasy4luvr chapter 25 . 12/27/2007
omg i totally love ur story!
update soon pls
| cherry617 chapter 25 . 12/27/2007
yes no more jack. he is such a prick.
| hopeless-flame chapter 25 . 12/27/2007
WHAT THE EFF? lmao- i'm sorry, but those knives were a bit friggin' random! i'm sorry i laughed, but it was pretty entertaining. and yes! elliot! tell jack that asshole to get up outta there! i hope she doesn't feel guilty. shit, if i had amazing sex with yates i would've forgotten about jack (the asshole), too. woot-woot!
| i found nemo chapter 25 . 12/27/2007
I'm quite sure most of your readers want Elliot to end up with Yates, but I can't help but sympathize with Jack, no matter how arrogant he is, and despite how much Yates seems to supposedly like Elliot. I don't feel anything between Yates and Elliot - it's more one-sided (Yates) and it's almost as if he's Elliot's rebound boy. She's trying to convince herself that she's over Jack by replacing him with all these guys. She may not realize it now, but sooner or later Elliot's bound to realize she's using Yates. After all, she's jumped pretty quickly from guy to guy.
Ahahaha I just don't like Yates. I'm not sure why...But bottom line is I want Elliot to realize nothing can ever happen with Yatees because she loves Jack!
| SummerBaby94 chapter 25 . 12/27/2007
i'm actually kind of glad jack's gone. maybe things will be less complicated now. whatever happened to brook and mitch, and everybody? they kind of disappeared.
| RockstarBallerina chapter 25 . 12/27/2007
yay maybe Jack is gone for good? and the YAtes and Elliot can live happily ever after. I really hate him (Jack) what the hell so he didnt get her move on man. Well I liked it the ntinknive thing was a little unrealistic though, but good none the less please countiue to update.