Reviews for Clouds shaped candies
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Great song. I love the title. It's such a cute title. Nice work.

Twilight Starr
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
nice work
Mckenzie Drestire chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Very powerful emotions here, liked the strangeness of it, the 'acid taste' of the stars and eating 'cloud shaped candies' very psychadelic. i like the way it descends into something else with the world being broken and the smile being a scribble, very gothic ideas here of the landscape adapting to a strange mood. Keep Writing, Peaceout, Kenzie.

PS - I saw your picture, very goth.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
Yeah. I'm confused I dont get it...
criti-sized chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
This doesn't really come off as a song to me, but a really great poem. The words in it hold a lot of meaning, and it's really beautiful the way you portray it.

angel-the-twisted chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
I liked that alot. Excellent song! I would love to hear someone sing it!