Reviews for 28 Days
little.artist chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
This was so heart-breakingly sad. I want to cry. But brilliant story nonetheless. Thanks :)
elma chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Wow. I kind of like that. I like it because it was sad without being bitter. It was kind of realistic and not hyped up emotion or drama. I liked your stop and start sentences. (long sentences punctuated by short ones). Sometimes it distracts from the story but for your story, it kind of set the tone/pace. I liked it! Good job! :)
HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I love the concept and how you worked the numbers into it. I thought that it was a clever move but what is the significance of the 28 days? Was he on holidays or what? That is the only thing I can ask a out this because the rest is fantastic :)
Sorrow's Smile chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
so I just had to review your story, because you reviewed mine. OMG I TOTALLY IDENTIFY WITH YOUR EXPERIENCE. (but you covered that already lol)

clever use of numbers in sequence, I liked the motif of aviator glasses, and its just a really cool story. I wonder if some of the numbers actually are real though...they fit in a little TOO perfectly(we spent 26 hours together, I checked 27 times a day). but its okay if they're not. creative liberties right?


Ginger2526 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
LOVE chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
You have no idea how much I love that piece. I've read it at least three times and every time I read it is like my first one ;). I find it very original and honest. It almost sounds autobiographical.

I love it, that's all I can say :).
Brolinshipper chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
I really like this. It made me tear up at the end, and lately stories haven;t made me do that(even sad ones). So bravo . . . and I'm not saying that to making me cry, it's to making me feel so into your story, I felt saddness like the character.
Too Much Info chapter 1 . 12/17/2010

This was profound and I wish there was more. There are so many unanswered questions.

See ya'
dust and glitter chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
this is stunning. it's just so. gosh, I actually have no words to describe it. it's in its very own league because very few things, if any, can measure up to this. it redefines the word 'masterpiece' :)

keep up the amazing writing,


fairytale-existence chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
i liked this story. maybe bacause I can relate to it. I just remember the times with my ex-really close friend who was a guy. And we sorta just drifted apart because of reasons I do not know, until now. I guess he's never going to tell me. It's hard seeing him talking to others and ignoring me. Okay, I'll stop rambling now.
ghurl00 chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
I love this story. It's heartbreaking. I was touched. Well done!
Myrix chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
I really liked this!

Its not the usual way of writting that i see aroun fp, but i seem to be drawn to it. I just dont like how its a sad ending :(...
itsames chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
I thought this was a beautiful monologue.

The emotions are clearly portrayed and the story was short&sweet, even though it covered 28 things.

Just a thought: I thought the writing of this could be adjusted. I, personally, think that there should be more emphasis on the number of things counting towards 28/the ending.

But that's just me :)

All in all, it was wonderful. You're a fantastic writer. This would have made a beautiful dramatic act/skit.
MelodieCC chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
good story; i really like it. it's bittersweet...
theloverslife chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
that was faboulous... im gonna cry... T.T
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