|Reviews for Will It Come?|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Great poem. Nice work.
| Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Wow...this one touched me. I'd tell you about what it means to me, but what it means to me is very personal, so please don't take it the wrong way when I don't tell you. This was beautifully written. Kudos.
| Vester chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
This was slightly choppy, less flowy than the other one. It was good but maybe blend some stuff together instead of seperating it so often. Altogether, another thumbs up!