Reviews for An Old Family Friend
Guest chapter 30 . 16h
I feel sorry for lucass...
delicious chapter 30 . 3/16
Great story enjoyd to the fullest
gyoung chapter 30 . 12/22/2014
I enjoyed the whole high-school-drama story. I admit that I usually evade this type of stories, but yours was pretty good and well-written. Spelling mistakes, a few and one that I would like to point out: it should be accepted, not excepted. Other than that, the story was engaging. I read it in a day!
Thanks for sharing this story.
Maiya Rayat Lal chapter 30 . 8/8/2014
also id like to say thanks for making it so long I mean 30 chapters Is a lot ... wished it was like 70 chapters ... like I'd like to find out what happens at the formal ... does Ashley see Amber and Tristan together ... what does she do ... what happens to Amber and Tristan's relationship after graduation ? what happens to the baby ? but overall just fuckin well done ! soz for swearing but I literally have no words to express my appreciation for this :D may god bless you ... from Birmingham, England, UK xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Maiya Rayat Lal chapter 30 . 8/8/2014
just turned 14 too so its good that its related to teens and aimed at teens xxxxxxxxxxx
Maiya Rayat Lal chapter 30 . 8/8/2014
OH ... MY ... GOD ...

I swear to god this story had me completely hooked on , how u described the love intimate scenes between Tristan and Amber like when it said 'I felt Tristan's chest touch my back and his neck in my shoulder...' something like that ... I just sat there blushing and smiled because I had butterflies just reading that . I stayed up till 4am and was on chapter 26 but had to go to bed because I couldn't stay up that long . but honestly this is what a love hate relationship is like . and Tristan seems like he sexy player . and u know when your so captivated with a book or story ... u start to create an image of what it looks like and u want to know what the characters look like ... which basically means this was truly an AMAZING story im speechless . more stories like this please . and P.S. I'm reading in August 2014 ;P
PJ Sibley chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Cover is misleading. Seemed like a fun premise but didn't live up to the description. The minute the characters' mothers determined to have Tristan share a room with one of the girls instead of putting the girls in one bedroom, the story went south. Occasional snappy dialog but Amber's subconscious went on a bit too long. Characters were emotional but emotionally stunted. Parents and teachers were clueless. Students' actions were vicious without any real motive other than being mean and/or promiscuous. In the end, it read like someone's rehashing of what they'd wished for in their own senior school experience and not a smart, fun story.

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Lily806 chapter 6 . 5/23/2014
Actually, Sailor Moon is an Anime, not a cartoon. Good story so far though.
Welcome to the Carnival chapter 30 . 3/21/2014
Awwe! I love this story so much. It helps that Tristan is so lovable, haha ;D
MusicGurl8129 chapter 30 . 2/16/2014
Awww, and they Lived Happily Ever After, The End (for the Night that is).
Good Job, I had some really good laughs, I love Characters Amber, who are funny & clumsy, way more fun. I also love all the other Characters :)
MusicGurl8129 chapter 26 . 2/16/2014
Ashley is totally faking. She's fake, so that must mean she's fakes, well, everything.
MusicGurl8129 chapter 16 . 2/16/2014
Haha, ''I HATE YOUUUU, BLA, BLA, BLA!''
''YOU TOO!''
-Silence-
''Friends?''
''Gladly.'' HA, HA, HAAAAA! ;D
MusicGurl8129 chapter 14 . 2/16/2014
Haylee is such a Female Dog! I can't believe her... she's really stupid if she considers Ashley the better Friend. Pfft, yeah right!
MusicGurl8129 chapter 9 . 2/16/2014
Goergia was hilarious in this! Haha! This Chapter had me going hysterical! :D
MusicGurl8129 chapter 8 . 2/16/2014
Aww, you see mean't to be! They're engaged so they must wed... ;)
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