Reviews for An Old Family Friend
Guest chapter 10 . 8/9/2017
What the heck how does he even know the word pussy
confused gal chapter 30 . 11/2/2016
it is not completed. then why the status of the story is complete? what is the talk Tristan asking for? and wht is the end of the story?
Guest chapter 30 . 8/9/2016
tristan dont love amber but lucas do. the story sucks
meandmoi chapter 8 . 8/4/2016
Guest chapter 8 . 6/6/2016
amazing story so far!
kissmybuttwith3 chapter 12 . 4/11/2016
hi again love u
BUTTCARINGTON chapter 11 . 4/11/2016
khevaden chapter 30 . 3/24/2016
I don't want this book to end... I'm gonna cry...
Tleblanc9 chapter 12 . 6/23/2015
Only thing so far that has bugged me is your description of the basketball game. First thing is that they are called refs not umpires, that's baseball. And a second thing is that he doesn't get 3 chances he would get a either a flagrant 1 or a flagrant 2 (depending on the refs choice) just for throwing the ball at his face. If he got a flagrant 2 he would have gotten kicked off.

Sorry for the rant I just can't stand when people try to describe a sporting event and obviously don't know what they are talking about.
Guest chapter 30 . 5/6/2015
I feel sorry for lucass...
delicious chapter 30 . 3/16/2015
Great story enjoyd to the fullest
gyoung chapter 30 . 12/22/2014
I enjoyed the whole high-school-drama story. I admit that I usually evade this type of stories, but yours was pretty good and well-written. Spelling mistakes, a few and one that I would like to point out: it should be accepted, not excepted. Other than that, the story was engaging. I read it in a day!
Thanks for sharing this story.
Maiya Rayat Lal chapter 30 . 8/8/2014
also id like to say thanks for making it so long I mean 30 chapters Is a lot ... wished it was like 70 chapters ... like I'd like to find out what happens at the formal ... does Ashley see Amber and Tristan together ... what does she do ... what happens to Amber and Tristan's relationship after graduation ? what happens to the baby ? but overall just fuckin well done ! soz for swearing but I literally have no words to express my appreciation for this :D may god bless you ... from Birmingham, England, UK xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Maiya Rayat Lal chapter 30 . 8/8/2014
just turned 14 too so its good that its related to teens and aimed at teens xxxxxxxxxxx
Maiya Rayat Lal chapter 30 . 8/8/2014
OH ... MY ... GOD ...

I swear to god this story had me completely hooked on , how u described the love intimate scenes between Tristan and Amber like when it said 'I felt Tristan's chest touch my back and his neck in my shoulder...' something like that ... I just sat there blushing and smiled because I had butterflies just reading that . I stayed up till 4am and was on chapter 26 but had to go to bed because I couldn't stay up that long . but honestly this is what a love hate relationship is like . and Tristan seems like he sexy player . and u know when your so captivated with a book or story ... u start to create an image of what it looks like and u want to know what the characters look like ... which basically means this was truly an AMAZING story im speechless . more stories like this please . and P.S. I'm reading in August 2014 ;P
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