Reviews for Avec Le Coeur D'Oiseau |
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![]() ![]() I really like the descriptions. You give enough detail to let the reader picture the scenes as they happen. Your writing style is very good, too. I also like how you added French words and phrases here and there to make it more authentic. You are doing a wonderful job at writing this and I hope you continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() could you put in some gypsy or french words? that would make it more... interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant! Well written and interesting. Also the French setting helps as I love any story set in France :) Update soon! rcb x |