Reviews for Drifting
PandaPanda chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Beautiful piece. The emphasis on "drift" was really effective!
CosmicalMadison chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
This is kind of sad, but good. Beautifully written, it's almost eerie at the end. Nice job!
Written chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
the endless amount of dots was almost annoying, and I think it prevented your piece from sounding strong, and just left it sounding withering.

however, it does portray the desperation well! It's not that I didn't like the poem, don't get me wrong. the format just distracted me as it was a little excessive. nevertheless, what do I know :)

I hope you keep writing.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
the format in this piece is really wonderful... I love the repetition and the spacing... the ending is especially beautiful because its very desperate... really great piece
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
Nice poem expressing a desperate plead for help.

Great job.

~Twilight Starr~
Dreaming One chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
God bless you sweetheart, I know exactly how that feels. You described it perfectly...it was a little painful to read! I remember it well. I felt like that most of my life up until March or so.

Just so you know...it can end.

Keep Writing! Don't ever stop!

~May