Reviews for An angelic doom
I'm.Running.Out.Of.Ideas chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
I liked it! Of course it may be because I've been a bit obsessed with demons and angels lately...
Jaded Aegis chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
not bad - but I found kinda wierd (like u said lol )
SilverTwilight chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
Ooh! I vote shot on sight. Kidding. The idea was original, and gripping. I think your writing style could have used a little more detail. It's worth continuing.


Nemonus chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Your prose is pretty good. It flows well enough and your word choice is apt. I especially like "porcine" for the demon in the beginning. They're creepy, the demons. It's not a perfect work: you've got some extra commas as in "dragon wings were, about eighteen feet". However, your disclaimer about being new is understandable so I won't nitpick.