Reviews for Untitled
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
I kinda like this. I would title it no answer. I get what you mean. I mean, I even wrote something called oops...about a school shooting because people tease these kids. So yeah, I kinda like this. And if you like that topic you should read things like White Rose (by smiling bob) and We have a choice (by sapphire serenity). Good work and keep writing. )
daretobe-dIfFeRnT chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
again, it's different, but thats a good thing:)

awh, she shouldn't care what people say! i bet it would get to a girl if she has to take it all the time though...
Kyllorac chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
I really like how you conveyed the meaning of the poem with such simple words. I think you are missing a word between "The girl can" and "those nasty". Still, the meaning is very clear.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Great poem.

I get teased about the way I dress, too.

~Twilight Starr~