Reviews for Mise en Place |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I want to bear-hug Alf; he's pitiful yet so adorable that I want to give him all love and support he needed! Thanks for sharing and making me in love with Alf . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck. This is at least the 10th time I've read this story, and I still cry every time. The emotions in this story really resonate with me. I hope someday Alfie will have his resolution, but until then I'll be here, a blubbery mess :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alf is such a good boy. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The A/N scared me a bit. I loke Alf. And Ryan. Alf and Ryan together would be great. |
![]() ![]() this is a wonderful story. i think i like it second-best just after your 'Nerves' 3 oh... bur the setting is probably better in this one - so amazingly complex 3 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did that sound offensive It sounded offensive didnt it I meant it to be Alf's position in his life. Like on a ladder. And he's desperately trying to move himself from that one spot to progress, or even decline, so long as he moves, but he just can't change his outlook or mind set. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do you know how loudly i screamed when i realised this was incomplete Let those decibels translate into how many people want you to finish this story and exactly how sincerely they do. Take your time hahaha Also some more similes for you: If this was visual, it would be raw, blue, macro, non-static. Always moving, trying to change, but still of the exact same content. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Just wanted to tell you how moving this story is. It is so well written. You sure have a talent to descibe feelings. Really beautiful - just like your other stories are. Waiting for the next chapter! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I will read this story every summer until the year I die. Everything about it is perfect and it will always be my favorite story of all times. Thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Alf. Peter's a jerk. I hope he gets a raise so that he can get out of there quickly. |
![]() ![]() That was the best first chapter of anything I've ever read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this has to be my favorite story possibly ever. someday I hope you make it into a book so I can buy it. No price is too high for owning this! |
![]() ![]() I miss this story ): it's one of the best i've read, ever! are you ever going to update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So the better part of my weekend has been spent reading this story and it's because I could5 put it down! It's made me laugh and then cry and then start the whole thing all over again. Plus I love the way it's written! The pov is amazing... A little of both 3rd and 1st... Does that make it 2nd? Anyways it's wonderful and I REALLY REALLY REALLY HOPE you finish it... :) |