Reviews for Mise en Place
LandUnderWave chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
I'm not sure whether I like it or not yet, since this is only the first chapter. It will be interesting to see what you come up with for this, though. It differs greatly from your other stories.

Lilz
Sundown chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Great, strong start. You manage to set up character, mood, conflict and a sense of setting all in the first chapter. Your writing has truly gone from strength to strength... I was pulled in after the first paragraph. Also, sorry I havent finished reviewing your previous story, I'm still reading through it...and loving it by the way. Can't wait for more, this looks very promising. Well written!
mandrake-o chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Hmm...

Your first paragraph's too long for my attention span, so I just sort of skimmed it.

But I read the rest of it twice just to make sure. And the truth is I'm not sure whether I like this or not, yet. We shall have to see.

) Mandraco.
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