Reviews for Goodbyes
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Great job at describing your feelings. We are all scared of goodbyes at times. Nice work.

Twilight Starr
crossoff chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
a great poem about something we all have to do
Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Beautifully written.
Vester chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Very good. You used "two" incorrectly and if it was intentional, it wasn't obvious. The ending was weird too, you said there was A word but you wrote three words. This is such a sucky review, I can't review poetry I swear. I liked the hourglass part, it was clean and clear. the fading part was good too. Good luck with your poetry!