Reviews for Dream |
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![]() ![]() Awesome! I really liked this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, this is alokin from yalime alokin... i saw this on top of the just in list and i was like, whoa, betamaster! i have to read it! and i'm glad i did! I like how there's this vague kind of... almost a mist hanging around this story... how you can tell what's going on, but it's a bit hard to make out... it's a scary idea, tho, some kind of being that could destroy us all in an instant... i can't find anything wrong with it, really, the only thing i could say you could improve on is it's a little wordy (?) but *I* have no place saying THAT to anybody. :D anyways, i really like it, adding to my faves! |