Reviews for Innocence
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Nice little poem.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
I like this.. the questions it asks are really wonderful and definitely make you think

A few things...

-Have you ever look at a little kid at Christmas time and wonder what.. have you ever wondered

-Santa Clause.. Santa Claus

-It was so care free, aloof even... carefree and aloof has kinda a negative connotation so it seems like and odd word choice

-I wish I could have my innocents back... innocence

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Sendo1920 chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
I agree, nicely done! :DD I loved the message and the way you formated it.