Reviews for Green Peppers and Sausage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hilariously funny. XD Pretty well-written (except I was confused at this line: “I see… Will pizza help? Green peppers and sausage, I wheedled in a charming voice that she could not resist. Oh, look! You’re smiling!”), but that was it. This was cute and kinda fluffy and just quite funny. (: I love, love, love it, and I'm adding it to my c2 right now. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol! I laughed throughout this whole fic! Wait a go to make my day plenty of notches brighter! D The whole dialogue structure works well too. At first I was confused at what was going on where but then I understood. That was cute and Laird is hilarious! Hahaha! Thanks for a wonderful crack up and sweet fic! A job well done indeed. D gulistanlik |
![]() ![]() Congrats! This one-shot has been nominated for 'Best One-Shot' at the SKoW awards! Keep up the good work! xoxo Cherry skow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw lol that was so cute ] haha now i'm hungry for green peppers and sausage pizza... grr.. hahah xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good. The only dialogue thing must be really hard. It really worked, though. There were some places it didn't, but overall, AMAZING. And really funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was the cutest thing i've ever read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice work, I would've died tying to write in all dialouge, very nice work |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... that was so... what's the word? oh, yes. ORGASMICALLY AMAZING. that's technically two words, though, isn't it? ah, well. the truth hurts. i feel drugged now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWE HOW KUTE THIS IS GOING ON TO MY FAV LIST |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow.. loved this ) very good job, I was slightly dubious as to how someone could write an entire thing with just dialogue.. but man oh man did you do a good job! -Alex |