Reviews for Sympathy For The Zombie |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story line! It's very original anyway ) -Frost |
![]() ![]() ![]() "So much for witty banter. Might as well toss that out alongside chivalry and VHS tapes." FUNNY. I thought you should know. I really love this, by the way. It's going on my favorites. And The Lottery is a short story by Shirley Jackson, which has absolutely nothing to do with your first story. (Besides needless killing.) I don't really remember how I found a similarity, but you should read it anyway. It's pretty good. Back to your story, I love it. Write more, demands Dellarose. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAY. Jesus, Allah, Buddha I love action scenes. You described it awesomely. The humour throughout it kept it from getting too intense, and Lillian is deliciously clever. Bwahaha 'Human Meat Pyramid." You're totally my new favourite person. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Diamond Province! I love this! I love YOU! Many hugs to keep you writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha-ha! I love this! The title really caught my attention-very Hitchhiker's Guide. I must say that this second story is amazing (the first one was hilarious too, reminded me of that story The Lottery only funnier.) But zombies are quite my favorite supernatural species, therefore this story wins. Keep writing, yes. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, a good spot to end, methinks. I like Lillian. She's cute and awkward. Your character interaction is stellar. XDD I'm totally not offended over the gender switchup. It's not like I made my chick-dom obvious. I like this story! I shall jump for joy when I get an email alert of another chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really gave me something to think about...in a weird way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is quite interesting and different. i like your descriptions |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol! Thereare just a couple things that you could change: one of them is that you should write out numbers. You know, like ten instead of 10. All the way from 0-100. The other thing is that the story a bit confusing. It might could use some more description for the scenery. -Frost |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting begining : ) I'll read more soon -Frost |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, another review. Heh. Zombies! Fighting undead would totally be my favourite passtime... had I... you know... I love Aidan. I love the whole date scene. You combined the surreal element exceedingly nicely, as well as the whole awkward teenager bit. It didn't seem weird to the characters, so it didn't feel weird to me either. Great job too, I find it's really hard to combine a surreal element as seamlessly as you did. You pulled it off completely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glee. Love it. I love how different your writing can be depending on the story. I totally get a feel for each character. "Sasafrass." was an awesome touch. And thank you, by the way for recommending me! That was very sweet. I did a little dance, I told my roommate. Just one question... ...do I really seem like a guy? XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh~ I'm intrigued, I'm hooked. This seems new and different. I like this! This is short, sweet and a little dark. Write more! |