Max! No having babies when zombies are around!

Whoa, goddamn this story kicks ass.

I eagerly await your soon-ish update.

Peace out yo'

Squee.

Aah, so Yuri was one of the guards or soldiers they had beat up previously?

I think I remember him. Did they fight him on some stairs or something, like when they were breaking in?

Urgh, I know Aidan is like, I don't remember, important or something... but what could they possibly need him for? He just wants to go zombie hunting. Are they going to turn him into a soldier?

The plan is set, now to get to it.

Good chapter. I anticipate finding out how they get past the zombies and work together under this new strategy.

Velvet.

Love that youve started to update so much, hurray! Happy New Years :D

I like this so far. Funny parts to it so far.

Think I'll keep reading!

Well, i'm all caught up! Good job!

You did write a good final scene for him! Good-job. You earned yourself a nice pat on the head. Nah, how 'bout a burrito instead? no one likes stupid pats on the head anyway.

Getting better! )

Yay! I finally found where I left off! Great chapter, btw.

Baah, Aidan isn't dead. (or, he better not be.)

This is probably going to be an incredibly epic final battle, and I can't wait for it, so update soon! I personally believe max should be killed in the most horrifying, obscene way you can think of.

anyway, as usual, i love this. update soon, and all that jazz.

Bye bye Ralphy :(

Woot woot! I'm famous! My name's in the Author's Note. :D

I was so happy to see that you updated THEN I noticed I was in the message then I thought "Whoa. I'm like... famous" lmao no but seriously.. I should be signing autographs ;]

lol Not at all. Glad you updated. For some reason I kept thinking that Ralphy was going to suddenly turn into a zombie. Then BAM. He hasn't. lol I guess my predictions and the ability to read into forshadowing bits are/is off. : Oh well. Mucho Cool Chapter. Lily's story is like a movie.. but better. Its like Twilight was so fast to be made into a movie but great stories and plots like this never seem to get recognized. It's a bittersweet thing I guess. Ehh. I won't blabber on.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! :D

-Stace :]

Don't worry. That was a pretty good way to go for Ralphy...

This chapter seemed a whole lot lighter and upspirited than the last one, though. I enjoyed reading it, despite how short it was.

And in Ralphy's death, he left a frequency, to which Lily has now come in contact with a mysterious person called Yuri... Sounds game. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Cheer up and keep up the good work. :)

Velvet.

Eh? I don't get it. D: Argh, it's been so long since I last read this... It was pretty good, though. It probably could have done without the multitude of sentence fragments, but it was good.

Did Lily turn in to a zombie? I kept getting the feeling that she was a zombie. But I do believe she was starved, right? So maybe that's what I was thinking of... Or maybe she's turning into a zombie? O:

Hmm. So, Ralpy-Jack is dying. Lily has to... do something. And Aidan is still being held captive. Interesting.

Velvet.