Neat chapter! I feel bad for Aidan, though. I knew that man was no good! They should have tripped him and chained him to a chair and give him a lesson about the North American Beaver! He would be taken aback by how great those wonderful mammals work together, and would repent of his ways, and swear his allegiance to the Beaver King! YAY! "regains composure* So, yeah. Great chapter, and great perspective! Love this style.

Wow! Great chapter! Again!

Yes, I realize that this is probably my 15th review-in a row. However, I feel inclined to review each chapter! Anyhow, this was another great chapter! The fact that there is a cure for, em, 'zombie?' makes you kinda angry at the government. Of course, who wouldn't be angry at a government that allows it's people to die, or not die? Whatever!

Now, the bad. There were a couple spelling errors, namely, the word "expirience." It's actually spelt experience. Also, in previous chapters, you've used the word breathe in place of breath. Of course, these are minor, and don't detract from the story. Just a little reminder! Anyhow, I love this story!

Wow, miss Aleksy the flying onion, this has developed into a well-written, fun, and great story! You're doing an awesome job at developing these characters, while at the same time retaining all their unique characteristics they've had since the beginning of the story! Also, you've been able to introduce new characters flawlessly!

Now, that pesky Alexis! Sounds like she should have been pushed into a volcano. Good writing!

Great chapter! That pesky Max! They should have cut off his limbs while they had the chance! Aidan's character is definitely becoming more human. You were very good in this chapter at conveying the immensity of the disaster that occurred years ago in the city, simply by talking about the nice neighborhoods now abandoned, mail from various organizations, and most importantly, Aidan's childhood home and the mementos contained within. Good job!

Good chapter! Looks like Aidan and Lily are getting a "thang" for eachother!

Hmm, a societal experiment? It makes sense. However, it kinda contradicts the news article earlier in the story, where it says something about a science convention in Forsa City allowed the virus to escape, something along those lines. But, maybe it started that way and the government decided to just let whatever happens happen? I don't know, but I hope to find out in the next chapters. You are doing a great job at developing both the characters and story line at this point! Good job! Didn't expect that about Ralphy. ralphy just isn't a name you associate with secret agents. Good job! Bravo!

Good chapter! Although, I would have like to see the mercenary fall over the top of the building, plummeting 40-something stories to his ultimate death, James Bond style, ya know? Good chapter! A real page turner! That is, if fictionpress allowed you to turn pages.

Sweet chapter! The suspense is killing me, let me tell ya. ;-)

Pretty good chapter! It seems that this is where your story "grows up," as one might say. I am appreciating the greater level of detail, and as always, new characters are cool!

Wow, a good chapter indeed! I especially like the portion with the newspaper article. Mad scientist playing with DNA or something, it sounds. Quite a cliff-hanger. Can't wait to read more!

I liked this chapter. I would, however, like more detail surrounding the environment. From the detail you do use, I picture an abandoned lower-manhattn. Narrow streets, framed by delapidated skyscrapers. Especially the prade part, I picture a Macy's Thanksgiving Day Parade down broadway, only, with zombies and no giant, infaltable balloon-float things shaped like cute cartoon characters. Also, watch grammer. It is very easy to screw up the wording, especially when you type fast, as I so often do. Other than detail and some grammer, a good chapter.

Very good! The characters are starting to come into their own. Ralphy seems a bit needy though. And at this point, Aidan seems to be worthless to their journey. Hopefully, he snaps out of it before they enter Forsa City. I can imagine that would be a perfect place for zombies to live. Millions of rooms, hundreds of thousands of buildings(I am assuming that Forsa is a large city, like Chicago-New York-LA big, not Albany big, because Albany is actually quite small). Surely, the zombies hide in the shadows of the rotting skyscrapers, in abandoned, dirty public restrooms, old train stations, hospitals, etc. A city has a lot of room for expansion of the story. It won't just be them standing in woods. The forest is predictable. A zombie hiding in the woods, over the hill, etc. In a city, especially a long abandoned one, there are countless surprises, and every city is infinetely different to any other. Hopefully, the story takes full advantage of what an urban atmosphere can do for a story of such an area of the planet, seemingly devastated by some sort of disaster to cause zombies "to come to life." Hmm. We'll find out. Sorry for the long babbling!

I think the intro is a little short. :/

I logged in just for you! AH I am so sorry that I haven't been keeping up with stuff lately. My brain is fried. But you should definitely keep updating. :) I'm figuring that SIFITZ is drawing to an action-packed, climatic, crazy twist ending? I'M READY TO READ, GRRL. So write on, cause I wuv you and Lily and Aiden and OF COURSE Ralphy and I need more.