please post more chapters i really love western stories

Well, it's ok, but there are a few large snags. For one, it's usually a good idea to not introduce too many characters at once to a story, and if you do, it's an especially bad idea to introduce them all by their names, and then nicknames. Now you have about 8 names floating around. Plus, about all of them were heavy steryotypes. You realize of course, that a recent immigrant to the area "Wudent be usin' cowfolk di'lect like this here, yawl." of course, that was a little overexagerated, but that's what I got out of it. Along with other errors like "Oh, Gina's a name you'll NEVER hear." or the fact that the sherrif allowed a man to shoot a civilian, a hanging offense in those days. Honestly if the people in that town are so unafraid of justice, these "Saloon Girls" would be being raped in the streets, along with the fact that what they do would be the height of dishonor for a women. All in all, could have been better.

wow!

this is really cool!

i love it!

please please please update soon?

OMFG I LOVE THIS STORY! you have to update this story pronto

UPDATE! Please! This is a really good story and I like John :D They're so cute! :D

loved it! looking forward to the next chapter!

i really hope u update this, it's a great start to a story! i luv all the characters!

Dun Dun Dun DAH!

Great story! I love the characters and the plot is great! Great job it is an amazing story and I hope you update soon!

Aww, hehe...Gina and John make a cute couple

well, it only took a few days but I finally got around to reading this. the little girl was very cute. a few little grammar/spelling errors and the spot where they were talking about inventing sign language the dialogue seemed to break flow, especially for the mother. other than that, very bittersweet chapter.

UPDATE NOW!

Wow, i'm very impressed. This is definitely the best written story of yours. Its really good, your writing seems to have hit a whole new level, its so much clearer. A few casual spelling errors and the word you were looking for was 'spurs' not 'spears' but beyond that, a reall good story.