Reviews for Night Thoughts Feburary 19th 2007
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
This is really well written. I love the effect of the short lines and your use of parallelism. This poem is very strong, I think largely because of those two things. The atmosphere you created here was great too—I get a strong sense of grudging unhappiness and a touch of madness. Keep up the good work!