|Reviews for Zack|
| Demyx chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
That was pretty phenomenally spectacular. Best prose I've read all year.
I love your description of thoughts being hung by rusty thumbtacks destined to eventually pop out and be lost one day.
It's great spontaneous stuff like this that swirls...no.../hangs/ in my head for hours then pops out of the cork board and falls away into oblivion before I can write it down. And it's great spontaneous prose like that that shouldn't be discarded for lack of dramatic rising action, climax, conflict and falling action. Maybe there is a hint of those things in this...a subtle mystifying hint.
It's pretty poetic, A.
I'm glad I could read it.