Reviews for Zack
Demyx chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
That was pretty phenomenally spectacular. Best prose I've read all year.

I love your description of thoughts being hung by rusty thumbtacks destined to eventually pop out and be lost one day.

It's great spontaneous stuff like this that in my head for hours then pops out of the cork board and falls away into oblivion before I can write it down. And it's great spontaneous prose like that that shouldn't be discarded for lack of dramatic rising action, climax, conflict and falling action. Maybe there is a hint of those things in this...a subtle mystifying hint.

It's pretty poetic, A.

I'm glad I could read it.