Reviews for Over You
Mitsukai Megumi chapter 14 . 11/30/2013
This story is awesome!
A Different Kind of Yellow chapter 14 . 8/27/2013
I suggest #2, I'd love to see that (unless you already have, and if that is the case, ignore me!). Since you had completed the story by the time I started reading it, I didn't leave a review at every chapter. But I loved it, I really, really did. Got a bit confused in the beginning where for a while you had Charlie talk about herself in the 3rd person and had Charlie start talking about Jeff and not Callie! Oh and Adam - what a prat! Obviously a very shallow man, though I liked how you portrayed him. Good character descriptions. Hooked me straight away, which is why I'm still awake at 2am instead of asleep. Woops!
Weird Anon chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
YO! Not like you'll see my review or anything but I TOTALLY LOVE YOU. Someone just actually used one of my favorite songs "lines" for chapters and ''maybe" using it for an inspiration. I-I. *speechless* GOOD WORK :3
cassiealan34 chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
Love this story:)
Margatini chapter 14 . 6/9/2013
Loved this story! River is just so damn appealing. It's not just him who's good, though-the rest of the characters are as well.
Margatini chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
I am definitely falling for River.
Ambar chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Alright can I just mention that I absolutely love her bestfriend?! Like legit, I love reading stories where the main lead has an actual, characterized best friend who it really there to support the way Cal is for Char. She's even in great relations with her brother and mother I love it! And Adam is just stupid, I would have laughed to if my ex randomly called to ask for advice to get back w/ his ex-girlfriend #shot yourself
Guest chapter 14 . 3/12/2013
You know...this was a really good fiction story and I totally loved it. the way. .the song over you is extremely awesome. ..I just heard it
HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 14 . 1/2/2013
Eeek! Love it! It's really well written and thought out! Charlie and River are so freaking cute!
HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 12 . 1/2/2013
Aww! I love this story and I was going to wait until the last chapter to review but I noticed a fairly significant error, an I decided to tell you despite the odds of you still being on this site. You wrote that Adam and Nikki broke up but I'm pretty sure that he was dating Meghan. Wasn't Nikki the other friend, the one who hosted the Halloween party and was already married?
brinalovesyouxx chapter 14 . 11/25/2012
Omg. Omgomgomg! This is such a cute anf funny story! I love it all and its just amazing and i love how everything ends up. And this story could have a really good sequel but im happy with everything you've done so all good! I cant wait to read more of your stories, keep up the awesome work :D xx
cwr chapter 14 . 9/25/2012

wanted to read the whole story before I actually reviewed it. I realise that it's been 4 years since the completion of this story and your other story as well! Just wanted to say that it's really well written and on par with any professional romance novels. Love the progression of the story as well and the development of the characters.
Guest chapter 13 . 9/15/2012
Simply amazing. Loved it. I felt really connected with your characters and the situation seem real and not the mushy happy ever after that is often seen in fictionpress (maybe it was because it is based one a real life situation ... hahaha)
BoysInBooksAreAlwaysBetter ;)

Ps: I fell in love with River and Alex and wanted to kick Adam's ass HARD for being a jackass. :)
realitysucksx chapter 14 . 8/12/2012
naaaaaaaaw th end ?!
did i tell you that i like river ? like reeeeally like ? :D hehe
job well done !
kept me entertained through out the day ! :D
keep it up :)
realitysucksx chapter 8 . 8/12/2012
i dont like adam ! hes .. hes .. he just sucks !
i love river though ;) hehe
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