|Reviews for Rejection|
| fairytale failure chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
I love the line 'The absolute perfection of rejection', I like how it rolls off the tongue. I think you should take the capital off of rejection, though, along with a few other randomly capitalized words - Hope, Desire. I would also suggest removing the ...s (forgotten what they are called), and putting 'you've failed' on a new line. I love the ending, the way you turn it around to rejecting rejection.