Reviews for Tomorrow
Nemonus chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Not bad. I like the third and forth lines. The intro of the character, "the man", is very quick and vague, so that I can't really undestand who he is or identify with him. He is there to populate the apocalypse, it seems...or cause it, "the earth cried for him"? That line does make him more important. Should that be "fateful" in the last line?
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
I thought it was beautiful!

great job!
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
Very beatiful. Lots of emotions.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
Interesting poem.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a wonderful day. :)

Twilight Starr
Camille the Clever chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
11 lines with more meaning than most can claim to have;

I think it's wonderful.