OMG that was so good! I saw some grammar mistakes but the story just pulls you in you can barely notice them. Anyway please continue writing i would really like to know what will happen to the kyle angle and the girl.

awwe kyle (as i will refer to him as well) is so sweet. why is she not suppose to see him?

omg finalially you updated! it's still awesome! love it. keep going.

This story is really interesting. I read in the comments that the paragraphs were a little long, but I think by Chapter 6 it got better. I like how you make the girls thoughts italicized and how the angel can read her mind. Though it might cause trouble later on. Can't wait to read the upcoming chapters.

Keep writing!

Great start. Can't wait until the next chapter.

wow! i really like this! where did you get the idea from? What was your inspiration?

Great story...

But the paragraphs are nuts! Sorry if I sounded rude, but I just wanted to emphasise how long they are! If it is possible, could you please shorten them? The already good story would become way easier to read!

Keep up the solid work! :)

I love it! It's very interesting, and well-written too.

I hope to see more of this story and find out what happens.

-Camille