Reviews for poetic liscence
for shame chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
it's not crappy.

it has beautiful imagery. and i love the summary.
Isca chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
"I can't decide whether I want to." This line has such a refreshing human-like quality to it. It's relatable. :)
CigaretteBurn chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
"i think i'm

falling

(in love)

with you

i can't decide whether i want to"

okay, that line AMAZING

The rest of the poem flows nicely too.
Shiro.Kokoro chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
Cute, pretty, and true. I love the love letters, but it's entirely true that just saying it is so much more.

Very awesome.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
I love the whole poetry/love thing and how theyre for idiots... and i love the ending "just tell me" its great
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
ah all your poems are so wonderful ]

I love this.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
i have a feeling youre in a similar boat as me with writing...and life is crappy and school is evil

this poem is a bit weaker than your usual works but still fun to read, nice stuff
Masked Soul chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
I like the paradox of it, the narrator is a narrating a poem and saying that he/she doesn't appreciate poetry, not when it comes to expressing emotions at least, when you want to say something like I love you just go ahead and say it don't dance around the fact by writing something mushy and sweet. good job
You're My Fucking Delight chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
First of all, let me just say that you are an absolutely brilliant poet.

& I have to stress ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT.

I've never been as speechless as I am now, & I'm having trouble finding the right words to explain how beautiful your writing is.

It's just incredible.

Never stop writing.

Sabrina
in a jar pk chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
i don't think this is crappy at all.

i love your work. x
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
:gasp: Great poem! I don't know how you keep coming out with such amazing things.

This is so beautiful and I love it.

School can't want you dead, they'd be robbing FP of a great poet!

Well done with this, hope things get better for you soon.

Lots of love,

[QueenVixta]
st. maverick chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
i love this love this love this.

i think emphasis properly conveys how water-color soaked brilliant this is. beautiful.

the last line.

i love this, especially the last line.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
you dont write much anymore

strange.

this seems very different from you

soft really
she smolders chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
I wish I was able to tell him I love him in words instead of in the lines of my notebook. I like this piece a lot. Take care.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
This is beautiful. I love the format of it, the first segment is just so right on (except I don't agree that poetry is for idiots, either - far from it!), and the last stanza is just perfection. Gorgeous. Keep writing! :)
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