Reviews for Still The Same
alwaysthereforyou chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
I like this poem and I understand what your saying. My only suggestion would be to separate the lines in different places so that it is less choppy. For example I would end the first line after the first period. If you like it the way you wrote it than that is fine too. Over all its good.
LoSt ReMeDy chapter 1 . 12/29/2007

Again I love this Very good! Keep at it!

Keep smiling LoSt ReMeDy