|Reviews for Still The Same|
| alwaysthereforyou chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
I like this poem and I understand what your saying. My only suggestion would be to separate the lines in different places so that it is less choppy. For example I would end the first line after the first period. If you like it the way you wrote it than that is fine too. Over all its good.
| LoSt ReMeDy chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
Again I love this Very good! Keep at it!
Keep smiling LoSt ReMeDy