Great going Cam, trying to make a cliche moment with a cliche apologize. It is so passed that situation, dude. Try to neutralize the situation, not reel her in. What are you trying to do, by giving her smug looks and trying to defend yourself by saying that you didn't do anything wrong?

This arguments made you looks like a stubborn highschooler, not a man back from war. Real mature indication there.

I like how Ry cut him off though, so no cliche moment. Cuz cliche just doesn't suit the situation. Though it's getting tiring to how she likes to lash out, but it is understandable.

Please, eff with the cliche. Why doesn't Cam try help her by being her friend and slowly mend the broken relationship? Not by trying and demanding her to build back their broken romance? She is a ticking bomb. You need to proceed with absolute caution and not rush things and trying to aggravating her.

AS if you could break up with her out of no where, break her heart, repeat the same procedure for a second time, come back, not repenting your mistake by groveling on her feet, instead demand her back, when she refused you're getting frustrated and angry and accusing and being nasty and asked her what is wrong with her?

What is wrong with you? Are you getting shot too much in the head when you served the nation?

You know, I think Ry needs to get a professional help.

If not for her unstable mentality caused by trauma, then it's for her drinking problem. She is an alcoholic. What she needs is not a meddling bestfriend, who despite her best intention doesn't know how to handle the situation. Besides, her drinking tendencies would not make a good resume for her career if found out.

I knew Brian's a good man, he left a good impression ever since he's made an entrance in the story. Not that I'm giving a hint for Ry to turn to him romantically and make him her rebound. No, no,.. but I think he has what she needs to slowly recuperate. Care, love and a level head & emotion. Not an explosion.

Yeah, go Ry! You need to heal. Being involved with Cam is not a good idea, especially since you're mentally unstable and still heartbroken. Cam himself is no longer his younger self.

Best to put some distance there.

Coming back from war was no reason to becoming cruel. And you know Cam was deliberately being cruel with no good excuse whatsoever except that he was frustrated. But, man, what the heck? He didn't know the situation she was in, and suddenly he comes back and throwing accusations just because she was rude. It's not like he hasn't realized that she was a changed woman and he has witnessed at first hand her rudeness and cold attitude, logically he should have been prepared.

And just as suddenly he threw the L word. Again, what the heck?

I thought he said he'd be more appreciative of what he has after he came back from his duty? Since he learned the value of life and stuff. Heh, he didn't show that he learned much from all his experiences out there, huh? Except becoming more brooding and a-hole-ish.

What? Shit. That doesn't make sense. What a recipe for an unstable relationship.

Sweetheart.. you need (okay pretty please?) to keep working on this story! It's completely enticing! Addicting.. gosh I should be studying right now.. lol. This story reminds me of Dear John.. but with a really kool twist! Keep it up please! Update sooner if possible! I give it 25 out of 10

Okay, so I think this is my first time reviewing for this story... (Usually if I start

Reading a book and it's already written for the most part I read quick and don't review till I catch up) so in all, it's really good! Sure there's typos and quite alot of cussing and mucho maximum mood swings, butbi like it(:

Specifically: this I think is my favorite chapter so far! I mean, who doesn't like some cat fight girl drama

Rama? Hahaha (;

Yeup so good work and goodgod; please don't take two - six months to update! I beg of you!

So update quickk please!

OMG! Love the story. I couldn't stop reading it. I can't wait to see what happens next. And please tell me that Cam and Ryleigh stay together! I hope that Brooke and Brian also find love in this... or a sequal or two... and not nesissarily together.

camleigh action would be nice LOL

i really hope they make it through in good terms

i'm so happy you updated! i missed these characters.

ryleigh is seriously a crazy bitch but i love her for it.

can't wait to see what happens next, update as soon as possible!

So happy you updated! i've missed this story.

I'm really glad that Cam and Ryleigh are somewhat getting back together, but she really needs to work on her issues! Hopefully things only get better for them, update asap!

Loved it! So glad that Brooke gave Ryleigh a wake up call! I can't wait to see what Cameron says to her. Update asap!

Nice story; mixed emotions are kinda confusing, but it's all in good understanding.

Another great chapter. You did great with the emotions of each character. I really hope Ryleigh forgives Cameron, she HAS to!

Still a great story. I'd love to hear more :]

Didn't care for Cameron in this chapter. He was quite nasty even after she tried to explain to him. Can't believe that they could go so quickly from being so nasty to all of sudden loving each other - not very realistic.