|Reviews for Release from the Soul|
| radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
I have to add this poem to my favs. Just beautiful. I will read some more of you work when I have free time. Love to read more.
Hugs & Smiles
i'm a hop & a skip away
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Wow, I loved the way that you wrote this, emotions seem at once confined and bursting from these words. They way that you describe youself/life is wonderful.
Keep it up.
| Lenners chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
You know, it's really hard to describe the feelings I feel when I've reading poetry like this. But here goes
Okay, I love the first line. And the third one. And the last one. The poem is really personal, it's great that you can describe your... feelings so easily. It also seems like you're looking for a purpose in your life, but you can't find one. Oh no.
You also seem regretful (See, your feelings on here are like crystal clear. Awesome.), and the words you use really show it. I admit, part of your poem makes me... want to cry? depressed? somewhere around there, but I get over it pretty quickly :P
On a side note, you seem to like using BIG WORDS O_O But that's good, better than reading Dr. Seuss any day
Try writing a happy poem? :P
Work hard yo