Reviews for Once again, only unnoticed
97thparis chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
This is very good. I like the set up of it, like counting down the days. :)
loversdream17 chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
GReat job. I really like it and how you have the days and the emotion you have it. Great job. your a talented writer.

Core Satiated chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
I disagree about the ending. A lot of my work has crazy twists in the last two lines or paragraph, and your ending delivered some shock value to an already emotional poem. I get it... and it was awesome. I loved the chronologic interpretation, when it was "x" ago when we...and saying that you're starting to forget, but still knowing exactly when...I have been in that relationship. GREAT stuff.
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
It's very sweet but the ending could use a little work, like the previous reviewer said. A very romantic poem.

DemonicTruths chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
Love it! The ending can use a bit work, but the rest is really good.