|Reviews for Once again, only unnoticed|
| 97thparis chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
This is very good. I like the set up of it, like counting down the days. :)
| loversdream17 chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
GReat job. I really like it and how you have the days and the emotion you have it. Great job. your a talented writer.
| Core Satiated chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
I disagree about the ending. A lot of my work has crazy twists in the last two lines or paragraph, and your ending delivered some shock value to an already emotional poem. I get it... and it was awesome. I loved the chronologic interpretation, when it was "x" ago when we...and saying that you're starting to forget, but still knowing exactly when...I have been in that relationship. GREAT stuff.
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
It's very sweet but the ending could use a little work, like the previous reviewer said. A very romantic poem.
| DemonicTruths chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
Love it! The ending can use a bit work, but the rest is really good.