Reviews for Chubby Honey
rohan23 chapter 2 . 1/11/2008
ahh can't wait for the next one. nice concept!
CantThinkOfAnamelol chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
woot! love the story so far-! pleaasee update as soon as posibal!u rock!keep em comin-!
SOfresh chapter 2 . 12/16/2007
Wow! I never knew I wanted to read this story so bad untill I reached the last chapter. I feel sorry for Mandi, being a mountain isn't very fun...And Ting sounds mean after he lost all those pounds. But anyway, I hope you'll be able to update this!
K.R.F chapter 2 . 12/10/2007
dude! wen r u gonna write the next chapter plz all i want is one little chap...o by the way u need more work on your closings like this chapter wasnt so convincing:(
Laina chapter 2 . 11/28/2007
i like this story too. maybe mandi could find out that Ting knows that shes Yuki. that would be interesting.
Phoebe chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
love this story!

when is the nxt chapter out?

can't wait for it.. x))
Nina chapter 2 . 11/21/2007
whens the next part comming?

cant wait ! .
bammbamm12 chapter 2 . 11/17/2007
plese continue the stroy its just starting to get intresting update soon ;
K.R.F chapter 2 . 11/12/2007
come on! pleez do the next chap! Its good i respect u 4 u'r cleverness by making this go to our heads but i really want see whats next! :3
Marie St. John chapter 2 . 11/10/2007
Ting is super hot! But I hate that he's become an a**hole. But then again, Mandi deserves it right? Right. I really am enjoying this story, sounds like a great plot. Again, I think that it is an awesomely creative new idea...Kudos. Can't - don't want to anyway - wait for more :)

~ Sarah
Marie St. John chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Oh! I just love this story! It is so hilarious, cute, charming, witty...I love it. I can so totally see the characters and I like that you are writing about something NEW and CREATIVE!Very cool. Keep up the great work :)

~ S-FF
EmoPanda4Life chapter 2 . 10/27/2007
Really good I can't for more chapters
boom101 chapter 2 . 10/26/2007
UPDATE. i like Mandi, make Marx FAT he deserves it. :) I like Ting even though he was a mountain. UPDATE.
lisamazing chapter 2 . 10/21/2007
gosh i love it!

i have never experienced a backfire of karma but...

wow

if thats what the fate of karma does, im never saying anything bad about anyone ever again!
K.R.F chapter 2 . 10/19/2007
I like this story a lot, you should keep on going,don't worry about about the whole busy thing, I understand:)I'm expecting alot from this story, you really are a heroe sometimes cuz wen i hav a busy n crazy week and theres a new chapter i can read off of, it makes me happy:)
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