wow nice story i love it haha well this story is like a memory of me when i was younger well it was 2 years ago i was fat

and tall good thing i m tall and chubby i hated myself than i bigen to lose wight becose my perents icuraged me.i love them.

i hope you get to continue

It's pretty good, it has a strong point of view this girl does. It's good.

Yay, new story!

i like it so far. it's good.

update when possible.

omg i love it!

thanks being realistic, its kind of saddening and stuff not having the story narrated by the fictional perfect person but you're addressing reality and that is so refreshing.i think mandi represents imperfection and problems that everyone has and everyone wishing to be perfect, even though everyone has an awesome talent somewhere(mandi singing:))

god story. do continue

Hmm... What to say? I really like it. Keep writing please! )

_ Cute. It's different to have a protagonist that's fat rather than just mildly unattractive. Isn't Barbie spelled with an i though? ._.

Anyhow, nice, I'd like to see where this is going.

Er, this is iyami by the way.

i love this!

Ohh karma loves to bite us all in the bottom. :) Sounds pretty good so far, so keep it up!

I loved it lots. Contuine writing!