Reviews for Pretensions
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
konban wa

Beautiful. Anguished. Such awesomeness (is that even a word?)... I absolutely loved the raw emotions in the poem. Each word expressed anguish - brilliant. I don't know what else to say really. "Brilliant" just summed it up.

Zaijen

-Shan-