|Reviews for june is our muse|
| Avide chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
Good language, good flow, good visual imagery. I enjoyed this poem.
| Anaare chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
First of all, thank you indeed for the review of "Je Crois Encore" on my first profile (setne). Nowadays, I hardly get any reviews there, so it is much appreciated!
This poem is once again a beautiful product. Combining the creation of poetry with seasons and colours is a wonderful entanglement that uses some great imagery. The title is also very effective and sums up the whole piece nicely. One question though: shouldn't, in the final line, "phases" be "phrases"? On the other hand, this also sounds good. Another reference to the seasons.
Good work and keep writing!
| Stormy Daye chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
really good, i like the rhythm
| Carnival Casualties chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
This is absolutely beautiful. I'll be honest and say this is the way I wish I could write, but it never seems to come out. It's beautiful, and true.
"worn-out poetry notebooks, crisping the words entirely until they curl and die, ready for burial in a paragraph of posies"
That was my favorite bit.