Reviews for A Year Just Isn't Enough
Ginnyloveslife chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
:) So sweet.
lymli chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
You made me feel like an actual person.

it's a very touching sentence, sometimes you're better 'cause of your friends and it's sad to say goodbye, nice thoughts.
life on rewind chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
Wow! First things first, I really liked this piece and the emotion expressed in it. I think you did a marvellous job of portraying her feelings and the writing all flowed nicely. However, I would set out one or two tips below:

I’m afraid your story is a tad clichéd. You should PLEASE put a twist in it somewhere, if we’ve all heard different variants of this story 39573895485 times before, why should we review this one? Make it stand out! Personalise it, make it yours! How many times have we heard of the loner who falls in love with the one person who talks to her and then leaves?

but apart from that, it was stunning. The three lonely sentences at the end added depth to your writing, as do the little personal details that show how much she loves him.

Murphy's Lawyer chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Qzie, I don't know WHY you're so bent on making me sad lately, but it's working..

- ML