Reviews for Smile
Alien Altered chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Twisted and bitter sweet. I see myself in this. It's very true. Good work!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
I like all the things you say you hate because we all have insecurities like that... my favorite is the phrase "recycled soul" that was awesome.. I like the ending too... very sweet
loversdream17 chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Great Job! I can relate so much to this people for i felt that way many times. Keep up the good work.


Tuft of Fluff chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
So sweet! It's amazing how one person can make us feel beautiful isn't it? The added bold, italics, and underline really helped to end the poem nicely and stress your point. Great work!
burntwater chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
This was really nice. I like the description, and well, it was cutesy. Nicely done.
phantom66 chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
wow! that woz lyk totally beautiful!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Oh man. How could I say I don't love this? Becase it is so beautiful, and so true. How people can make us feel like that. I can't even put words to make this poem more. It is perfect. Wonderful job.
Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Beautifully written d:)
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Such a sweet poem!

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a wonderful day. :)

~Twilight Starr~
choco man chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
amazing baby, amazing

my favorite by far, in the way its written, and what its about

kinda left me speechless at the end XD

i love you