...And I just realized I am the only one to say anything but "OHMYGAWD I LOVE YOUR STORY!"

...sorry about that I guess, but in my expirience the type of reveiw I left is a bit more fufilling than "I LOVE ISAAC OMG AND REN IS SO CUTE GREAT JOB UPDATE SOON!1!"

Keep going. Live up to your potential.

...Well Lady.

I've read a lot of your stuff, almost all of it really, and usually it's fairly good, but I hate to say you seem to have dropped the ball on this one. It's just not as strong as your other writing. The characters could definately be stronger, less repetitive. It doesn't seem like you really..oh I don't know. Feel them, perhaps? Or that you've lost yourself too much in the characters themselves to focus on a believable plot. Your style is slipping - although it is there, I give you credit for that. It seems like you're trying to write about something you don't know very much about.

I'm definately not trying to be mean, that would be a pretty lame move on my part because there IS some potential to this story, definately. But the depth of the characters - I know it's there, your other characters have it - just doesn't come out. Serenity seems...repetitive, boring. There's a life in her, but it isn't expressed well. Isaac is...mainstream. Typical bad-boy, with the typical bad-boy depth and sob story. You know how with "emo" kids, and all the "pain", it gets very...typical? That's how Isaac's character feels to me. I'll check up periodically to see how this is going, but as of right now there isn't much of a hook.

Also, the romance doesn't really feel...real. But that isn't really your fault...it's hard to write a believable romance.

I really like your story, and your chapters are so long! It makes me jealous ;) How long does it usually take you to write a chapter?

Wow! I gladly Isaac and Serenity was dated now but thats good to tell honest to Evelyn now...Hurry update soon.

aw...cute story. PLiz keep writin', This soo goes on my alert lists..lol. Happy 2008 as well!

Hey as i am one on the many ppl w8ting for your story, i gz i have to help to get the review bar up to 65 rite?

Rite. Anyway i realy love the story and i wud luv a chapter 8 to be added real soon.

Ur main male character is relwi sweet. (all of us is in love with him!) anyway, if i cud maB giv u a bit of an idea?To break his perfect character just a tad, maB u shud giv him a jelz moment whr he is all protective ect, u knw, just to make him a bit more real.

Hope all is well, and that ur busy typing up a storm...

RL

OMG i love it. y does she go to the hospital though?

so i read the summary for this story and i liked it so i put it on my alert list so i could read it when i had more time, so when you uploaded chapter six i ended up reading it and then i realized i hadnt read this story yet. so when i restarted from the beginning chapter six made a whole lot more sense and chapter seven rounded it off amazingly. kep updatingg :]

This was a very interesting chapter...

My only comment would be how easily Evelyn forgave Serenity. From my own experience, even the smallest of fights last longer than a single conversation. Something as big as a broken promise, in my opinion, should have taken longer to resolve.

Other than that, excellent. I hope it won't take too long for the other reviews to come in!

~Dreamless~

mya is such a so rude. I HATE HER! man. well hope u update soon. and about time that isaac and ren are going to tell ppl better stay out of it! update soon.

I love your story! It's one of the few I constantly check for updates. :)

Also, can you make Mya get hit by a bus or something? She's such a... witch! I can't believe she would do that to someone! So yeah, she definitely deserves that. Or maybe a train... :)

Update soon!

So I just started to review anyhow I really enjoy this story although I hate Mya and her reasons for not likeing Serenity are completely soon please.

Just wanted you to know that I love your story. Keep up with the great updats!

AW! This was such a great chapter! oh my gosh Serenity needs to beat the mess out of Mya NOW! How can she be so timid when she's getting her butt whooped! GAH! She needs to grow some BALLS AND HIT THE GIRL!

Its stories like this that I love reading. Its so sweet and honest, and I can't wait for the next chapter.