Reviews for Textbooks and Graffiti |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Its really goos I hope you write more!- |
![]() ![]() Wow! I can't believe she didn't fight back. Intresting chapter. That dinner is gonna be drama boy. Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've just read all 7 chapters and I have to say that this is amazing! I'm glad Isaac and Serenity can be together now. Update soon, I can't wait to read more of this story! |
![]() ![]() Honestly, I think your story is very touching. I love your story because it hits home. I know what its like to be that girl. The geek who somehow gets involved with people she doesnt necessarily want to. hah! Plus (Isaac sounds sweet) You have to keep writing more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! I really think that the be mean to her idea was really clever! It's stupid, but not obviously so. good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, Nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay,okay, sorry for not reviewing. THis story is really good, and i hope to read more of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! Lol yay! Evelyn accepts them. It's good that they didn't have a huge fight. Ugh! I hate Mya. That was her fault anyway. It's cool that Isaac was so protective of her...Great chapter..lol. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this the end? i liked it a lot... it was the first fic that i've read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok so i just finished reading ur 7 chapters and i was trying to think of critism but all i could come up with was compliments :D hahaha i love ur style of writing and how u've developed the characters unlike some other stories on this site, each character has a very different personality and that's what makes this story so good and so real i'm really glad that isaac and serenity can be together openly now they are SUCH a cute couple and if u had to hold off their "coming out" (hahaha that sounds really strange) any longer, i'd be disappointed perfect timing for every event u've really captured me in the plot i was going to review every chapter but i just wanted to read it faster haha i was really disappointed when the little arrow was gone and i realised that there were only seven chapters now all i've got to do is go and check out ur other stories! ill review on every chapter from now on because i know how good it feels to recieve reviews plus i want to help u reach the sixty five mark alright so this review is extremely long sorry bout that i'll make sure the next few arent as lengthy cya oh wait by the way UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! I can't wait until Monday. I would so love to put Mya in her place, the sleazy biotch! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My honest opinion: Well, you wrote all the Fluffy-Puffy-Mushy stuff a little too earlier...But that doesn't matter. Just hope the next opponent is better than Mya and Evelyn... Put some twists into it, girl! So far, the characters like Ren, Isaac, Evelyn, Mya etc... They're becoming more realistic throughout the story, including Ren's father. Good job I must say! I wonder if you could write more anguish scenes in this story, so that it can be exciting to read.. Well, no one likes reading 'plain-on-going' stories...But if you don't want to, it's cool... Okay, that's the end of my honest opinion.. Sorry for the long review...T.T |
![]() ![]() Aw so cute! Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! I love chapters like this! I love Isaac. and Seiji made me lol a couple times. he wins! XD pudding |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read the first seven chapters, and I love it so far. Everything happens a little quicker then it normally does in stories like these, but I think I like it better this way. Tons better than anything I could ever write. |