That was really good. I suggest spicing up your sentences with a few adjectives. But, overall, that was really good and I hope you continue to write.

Great story so far. I really like Isaac and how the sister was still hung over the past, an interesting twist. I hope you write more soon.

-R.S. Scott

let me guess..her dad really does ask Ms. Charleston? lol that'd be funny.

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HAHAHAHAHA! I know a guy names Isaac Evens! THAT IS SO STRANGE! 0_o

Heh... nice! And long too, always a plus!

So far, I love this story. It's written really well and the plot really sucks you in. And I adore Isaac already. :) Update soon!

Let me guess...her dad is going to ask out Ms. Charleston :)

Wow i love this story! Please do more soon! I can't wait!

.Mistress

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interestingg story so far! keep it up :)

oh! Caitlin this story is really good so far. I like it alot!

Keep it up dude I wish I had joor mad skillz joo win nintey billion hobo stars!

Luff Bai,

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this sounsd like it's going to be a cute story. can't wait for more! _