Reviews for Abort! Abort!
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Wow. That is tragic. So sad. Yet beautiful in a poetic way. Oh, this is just aching. Keep writing! :)
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
Astounding poem.

Very thought-involking.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a wonderful day. :)

Twilight Starr
Tikklz chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
This was the most interesting and just plain GOOD piece I have read lately. Thank you, because good writing is most refreshing on this site. I love that you kept coming back to their connection. And how you used so many others senses other than sight. Just plain good.