| Reviews for It's Been a Long Time Coming |
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   Maverick1997 chapter 6 . 6/28/2012 Ahhhh lovely story so far! Decided to do a search for Marine stories and voila! your story popped up. I'm absolutely loving it and can't wait for an update. She better fix this stuff with Eric or else! I got a little confused with all the characters but I think I have it all sorted right now. Most of the confusion came from the Eric/Erin stuff and the Adam person coming in from nowhere and not actually being a strong prescence. Still, I loved it. I shall eagerly await your next chapter. Mav |
| LovingBlackParadise1 chapter 6 . 10/16/2010 Ok i'm getting confused when your just putting the dialog and hardly any details . like Kennedy looking at the ground or wringing her hands rolling her eyes . then when you just put dialog and you cut it off with someone else talking and just go back and forth its confusing because your not being clear as to who is talking. if you dont have a beta you should get one because they can help you with this. But i do like your story so far the plot is good and the characters are amazing i love kennedy and eric and liam .. hate marley and melanie . like omg ( hehe ) update soon ( just with more details and more info on who is talking and interrupting . and whos talking back and forth . ( also you might not want to put a space between every dialog spoken . it breaks up the rhythm . |
| Venetiangrl92 chapter 6 . 5/4/2010 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY! I LOVE IT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! |
| AllyTheVamp.Chick chapter 5 . 7/15/2009 PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! THIS STORY IS REALLY GOOD AND IT'S DRIVING ME CRAZY THAT I DON'T KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON. YOUR SUCH A GOOD WRITER! |
| AllyTheVamp.Chick chapter 6 . 6/23/2009 I love this story. Please continue it. i really want to know what happens. |
| Vulpes Rueppellii chapter 6 . 2/21/2009 Please, please, please! Put up new chapters! You still have 19 to 11 chapters to go! Lol. It was wonderful. Made me laugh and cough. I'm kinda sick so if I laugh I cough. But POST MORE! :] |
| NessaTheElf chapter 6 . 9/10/2008 So I have read all of the posted chapters and am totally in love with the story/plot line. Post more soon. I do suggust that you post who each screen name is so it is less confussing for the reader. I didn't figure out who everyone was till about 1/2 way through the aim chat. Also I would put in more details about Kennedy's surroundings and reiterate character appearances and characterists. Just my opinion though. As for the over all story you are doing a great job and need to post more soon! |
| Izzey chapter 6 . 7/14/2008 good chapter. |
| Ultra Glacial Rose chapter 6 . 7/14/2008 Hahahaha, sorry this is like an amazing story! *internet highfive* Please, oh please, oh please update soon. _ It's funny as hell. :] |
| Kaleigh Windelynn chapter 5 . 7/14/2008 Wow. UPDATE! I like it. |
| buffyeesummers chapter 5 . 7/4/2008 Oh - I love it so far. When will she finally start to recognize the chemistry between Eric and herself? Exciting. Can't wait for the next update! |
| rosexofxflame chapter 4 . 6/8/2008 haha... thanks for replying... apparently my review got cut off.. yes that was a compliment! it was supposed to say wow... "I love your story! Can't wait for more!" but that apparently didnt get sent. haha. anyway. keep up the good work! I look forward to more chapters to sent incomplete reviews for! _ |
| Izzey chapter 5 . 6/8/2008 omg, she is, like, so totally blind. sorry, i couldn't resist. anywayz, awesome story so far, can't wait for the next chapter |
| xbrunnettex0 chapter 5 . 6/7/2008 aww i like ERic |
| rosexofxflame chapter 5 . 6/7/2008 wow... i |