This is really good! I wish it was longer but I completly understand! I hope if you do get published I know where to find your stories!

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Aww, that vertical-book-throwing was genius. XD I think I would just huddle in a corner out of embarrassment, but Kelsey should've at least gotten his name out of it! (That would've been a mini-victory. XD) I love Natalie; what are best friends for, after all? Other than being perpetual headaches and people who unceremoniously push us into the dating scene. Haha, I love it!

Would you mind to write that this stroy is removed on the intro or somthing?

I only got to review this one just now. But one thing I'm sure about? 'Hercules' and I are both book freaks. I swear, I DO NOT like my books (except textbooks) to get all dirty and crumpled. I am proud to admit that my personal collection of novels do not have bent and/or destroyed spines. Ha.

I completely understand. I want to publish some of my works too so I took them off of FP when one of my friends stories was plagiarized. But the first chapter was really good. I'll be sure to buy your book when it comes out.

XD "Does he look like a girl to you?"

Good question. I'm going to be up all night thinking about that XD

Anyway. I'm sorry you were forced to stop posting. You guys probably don't check this anymore. But I figured I should tell you that I really do like this ) Your writing style is excellent. Good luck with Plagiarism Haven.

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I understand the reason you took down your stories, but if you could, in the summary put 'Removed' so that people don't get their hopes up about a cool new story to read only to be disappointed. If you could take the time to do this that would be amazing. Thanks!

-Tasha

Though I only managed to read just one chapter of this, it is very cute and funny.

Your character reminds me of one of my best friends. I love the conversation between the Kelsey and Natalie. It seems to be very realistic and absolutely funny.

I really want to read more so hopefully you'll get it published.

I only managed to read the first chapter (darn those plagiarisers!) but so far it's really funny and it sounds sweet.

I hope you do get published someday.

-Tetrys

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Aw so cute!1

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Aw. Your story was adorable! Very orginal, it was nice reading a story that was not a gazillion chapters long. Also kind of sad because I wanted to learn more about these characters! haha you can never win can you!

Anyways awesome story~ can't wait to read more of your stuff!

x reeka