Well, it's about time. I was just abut ready to give up on you. I enjoyed the first chapter and have been waiting several months for you to post again. Lucky you, I am very patient when it comes to books and stories. Next chapter(s) you had better not make me wait as long. *uses husky threaghtening voice*

JK...LOL

Very well done so far. I would watch your grammar a bit. Good action in the first chapter. You seem to slow down a bit in this chapter, a tad to much in my opinion. Keep up the good work.

~Bri