|Reviews for breakfast, a study in sex|
| Ondine's Curse chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
i love this.
the imagery, and how i seem to be able to taste it and smell it.
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I love the description of tastes and smells that are displayed here. Favorite line: "I fold.
Like towels around you,"
| wishing.on.echoes chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
I drank vodka for the first time Friday night.
I found I am quite a sucker for it.
I also discovered it leads me to being stupid.
I like this, the way it relates and the way it says so much in so little.
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
wow...I love this. It's just amazing. Keep up the excellent work, I cannot wait for more.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
oh, sugar. yes. you could set your teeth along every line and come away [bleeding] full of flavor. lord, chica, i love it.
| S Noelle Long chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
this made me think of certain morning-afters: sun-bright through sheer white curtains, plum and strawberry juice painting lips dark reds, shining hair gone wild with sleep and activity, soft content smiles.
there are parts in this that bite harder than that visual i just gave, like biting a wrist into splinters, bleeding, "you should know better."
but the contrast only makes it more compelling.
| Alana Starr chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
You are my favorite author on fictionpress.
Your words are amazing.
| by His blood chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
it's so great to see something new from you again. you hadn't posted in a while, and i was wondering where you had gone and afraid that something had happened. this definitely does not disappoint. raw, brokenshattered and beautifulgorgeous, as always. i fucking love it.