Reviews for Loveless
AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
When you get to "tied to you," it seems to break the anonymity of the poem. It felt odd to be almost lectured about love, but once you start to take it to a more personal level, the poem felt remorseful instead of instructional. I did like, however, the idea of everyone thinking they know about love. Few have even had such a connection with someone, so the cynicism was very interesting. It's a good poem, though at the told point, it makes it feel too personal.
Kyuubixx chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
nice poem

true, very very true...]

always gats b y chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
very true.

and it has a nice flow.

very well written.

thanks for your reviews :)
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Nice poem. It's true.

Twilight Starr
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
good work
lordelfy chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
i agree with this, specially the end. I guess love in the long run is worth all of the pain and suffering people go through..nice poem!
DiaRose chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
Very cute. Nice flow.