Reviews for Broken Man
snazzysnork chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
OH MY GOODNESS! That was amazingly amazing! it was very emotional...i'm sorry...give me a moment...*tear*...I give it two thumbs WAY up! :) hm...that smiley face is kinda cute...i think i will give Spiffalicious another one! :)
Tenshi Ongaku chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
Hey Spif'! Finally found you're page with the 'map' you gave me. I love this poem; better than the poem about the atom bomb. Now, enough with the friendliness now I'll give constructive critism. You have beautiful metaphors and such but shouldn't there be some punctuation? Like commas where you breath...but to overly repeat myself...I LOVE THIS POEM!

-Nixe-
alternate peronality emporium chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
That's awesome, my one tip is just to edit the document once it's uploaded to fictionpress, that way you can put breaks in where they were originally intended. It's great though, and I could definitely see it to music. What sort of style to you type in.